10 February 2008 @ 06:29 pm
Hugs & Kisses (1/1)  
Title: Hugs & Kisses
Author: Nytel
Rating: PG
Spoilers: None.
Pairing: Ronon/Keller
Genre: Romance/Fluff
Summary: Written for the [info]sg_onesweetlove Valentine's Day challenge, for the prompts hugs and kisses. ;)
Word Count: 496
Beta: [info]carpenyx 
Disclaimer: I am merely borrowing them. No copyright infringement is intended. 

Hugs & Kisses
 
“Blue or Green?”
 
Jen laughed, but answered anyway. “Green,” she said, smiling. She kicked her feet back and forth in the water as she thought of her next question. It was a beautiful warm and sunny afternoon, and she was pleased Ronon had suggested the south pier.
 
She wasn’t even sure how their little game had started, but she was enjoying it immensely. “Pink or Red?”
 
Ronon snorted and turned to look at her. She couldn’t help but let out another giggle; of course he wasn’t going to pick pink.
 
Ronon smiled with her and leaned back on his elbows, face angled toward the sun, eyes closed. His feet were drifting in lazy circles in the water while he thought of what to say for his turn. Jen was more than happy to sit there and watch him. They were in no hurry, and she was feeling more relaxed than she had in weeks.
 
“Running or sparring?” He finally asked. He opened his eyes and looked at her, betraying the underlying mischief there. He knew her answer just as well as she did.
 
“What do you think?” She replied good-naturedly.
 
Ronon shrugged, still looking like he was up to no good.
 
“Hugs or kisses?” Jen found herself asking without thinking, for some reason the question had popped into her mind.
 
Ronon raised one eyebrow, obviously surprised, but he didn’t seem uncomfortable. Jen would have thought for sure she knew his answer, but his response came as a shock to her.
 
“Hugs,” he stated without hesitation.
 
“Really?” She questioned, unable to help herself.
 
He nodded, still staring intently at her.
 
“I just, I would have thought…” She felt her cheeks warm as memories from the night before flashed through her mind. She had no doubt Ronon could guess her train of thought, and she was thankful he didn’t say anything about it.
 
“I like kissing,” he said, unabashedly. “But hugs are better.”
 
“Why?” Jen was genuinely curious now. It wasn’t that she didn’t understand the allure of a good hug, she did. But this was Ronon, probably the toughest and most definitely the sexiest man she knew.
 
“They’re comforting,” he said softly as he turned his gaze to look out over the ocean.
 
Jen listened attentively as Ronon spoke.
 
 “You get to savor the moment, etch the feelings into your memory.” He paused for a moment. “And there’s nothing like knowing the person you love is in your arms, safe.”
 
Jen felt a surge of emotion. She knew that Ronon was a sweet and caring person underneath the rough exterior, but she hadn’t expected to hear him say anything like that.
 
Reacting to his words, she closed the small distance between them, wrapping her arms around him and squeezing tightly. He smiled softly and nuzzled his face into her hair as he returned the embrace.
 
She smiled against his chest and leaned against him. Then she whispered, “I like hugging better too.”
 
The End
 
 
Current Mood: exhausted
Current Music: When You Say Nothing At All - Alison Krauss
 
 
( 24 comments — Post a new comment )
vipersweb: PC Andy[info]vipersweb on February 11th, 2008 02:31 am (UTC)
adorable fic!

You need to fix your coding though as it's not lj-cut.

nytel: Keller - Doctor[info]nytel on February 11th, 2008 02:34 am (UTC)
Sorry about that. Damn. I hate lj at times. Seriously, it was acting all wonky and I tweaked it three of four times and thought I had it... *shakes head* Anyway, it's fixed now. Thanks for letting me know. :) Glad you liked the fic!
Nona: Snape hug[info]lostarkeo on February 11th, 2008 02:34 am (UTC)
AWWWW! OMG! Too cute! I love it! I heart hugs too! *hugs* :)
nytel: SGA - Hugs[info]nytel on February 26th, 2008 01:23 pm (UTC)
*g* Thank you! *hugs*
ez_as_pi[info]ez_as_pi on February 11th, 2008 02:46 am (UTC)
Wonderfully, simply sweet!
nytel: Helo[info]nytel on February 26th, 2008 01:23 pm (UTC)
:D Thanks!
scoob2222[info]scoob2222 on February 11th, 2008 04:50 am (UTC)
okay that was beyond adorable, it was like adorable times infinity
nytel: Keller - Jennifer[info]nytel on February 26th, 2008 01:24 pm (UTC)
:D Yay! Thank you.
(Anonymous) on February 11th, 2008 06:48 am (UTC)
Nice
I like the story and reasoning why are hugs are better and yes I agree they're better but not say no to kisses from Ronon thanks for cheering up night and long day at work.
nytel: SGA - PJ[info]nytel on February 26th, 2008 01:24 pm (UTC)
Re: Nice
I'm glad you liked it. :)
d: SG 'Team Ronon' (az)[info]nebakanezer on February 11th, 2008 07:04 am (UTC)
AWWWWW! That was just adorable and perfect and I loved it!

And you wrote this before you saw Trio right? You still haven't seen it have you? Well you'll know why I'm asking when you see it. But it's a wild coincidence!

Great job!
nytel: Cote[info]nytel on February 26th, 2008 01:25 pm (UTC)
*g* Yay! I'm so glad you liked it.

And yes, I did write this before I saw Trio. Lol. And I know why you're asking. It's funny, because P and I kind of played this game in Yellowknife though it was more like 'if you had to choose between a desert island filled with apples or one filled with oranges, which would you pick?' Lol.
2bluaeryn: Ronon[info]2bluaeryn on February 11th, 2008 03:02 pm (UTC)
This is very sweet and I have to agree w/Ronon...I like hugs too!!
nytel: Cherries[info]nytel on February 26th, 2008 01:26 pm (UTC)
Yay for hugs! :D
nath_42[info]nath_42 on February 11th, 2008 06:46 pm (UTC)
Hugs are good. The story was refreshing. Sweet.
nytel: SGA - Team Meal[info]nytel on February 26th, 2008 01:26 pm (UTC)
Awe, thank you. I'm glad you liked it. :)
adafrog[info]adafrog on February 11th, 2008 10:34 pm (UTC)
awww....
nytel: R/K - Worth It[info]nytel on February 26th, 2008 01:26 pm (UTC)
*grins*
Lori: sga - keller [smirk][info]carpenyx on February 12th, 2008 01:35 pm (UTC)
I thought this was sooo cute and adorable :) I love Ronon's explanation about hugs. :)
nytel: Nicki[info]nytel on February 26th, 2008 01:27 pm (UTC)
Thank you! *hugs*
~mommy monster~: Ronon/keller[info]momm2five on February 13th, 2008 06:53 pm (UTC)
sweet! I agree, and then the hugs can lead to kisses . . . lol!

Very nice fic!
nytel: Ronon - Lean[info]nytel on February 26th, 2008 01:27 pm (UTC)
That is so very true. ;)
anyareed: Atlantis Sunrise[info]anyareed on March 14th, 2008 04:48 am (UTC)
This was a very sweet piece. I loved Ronon's explanation of why a hug is better. This is a great piece.
nytel: Jewel[info]nytel on March 15th, 2008 06:33 pm (UTC)
Thank you, sweet was what I was going for. :)